Thursday, May 7, 2009

Colors of a Concussion (working title)

The first is red:

it's a dizzying scarlet

that swirls and wraps around 

your forehead.

Most of the time

it is red, and only red.


Yellow is trouble:

it signifies the confusion. 

A mustard-gas haze

as you can't regain

equilibrium.


The Blue:

clouds everything.

While teeth bite down

your muscles clench and 

release. This is

where the ringing begins,

a colorless sound

disorients

as they raise you to your feet.


Purple:

completes the rainbow.

The bruising pain

that pulsates

can't be cured immediately by the ice

that melts into water and 

trickles

down your spine.

2 comments:

  1. Tommy...

    This made me shiver. Really it did.

    I have never had a Concussion, but my brothers have and it's a scary thing.

    The way you describe it in colors...it's amazing.

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  2. This poem is beautiful... and haunting.

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